It's well-drawn but much too much of a closeup POV
IMVHO
It is better for art and animation definitely to vary the "camera" angle
I'd recommend
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Graphic Storytelling and Visual Narrative: Principles and Practices from the Legendary Cartoonist

Thanks for the info mate, I'll definitely look into it.....

I just stum**** on this

It might help you get started with basic animation.

Thanks i need a guide like this, trying to break into animation for I heard that's where the big bucks are to be made.